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Doctor's Waiting Room - Aug. 18, 2026

Gary Hunter
Aug 18
1 min read

old man, head slumped

sits in a chair

legs between his walker


his breath tells the story

chest flex on the inhale

big sigh with the release


more than most here,

his suffering must wait


I wonder if it comes in a moment,

the voice that whispers

life is too much, just let go,


or need it get louder

almost shouted

before it’s heard?


I slip past him

glide with a nurse

to a back room


my wellness exam quick,

painless, my blood’s marker

for the kidneys, a little high


he’s gone when I return

though my questions linger

at his empty chair


as I turn to leave

I tell them to come along

 
 
 

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