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Love and Arguing - May 27, 2025

  • Gary Hunter
  • May 27, 2025
  • 1 min read

screaming voices

two houses over

 

a walking couple in combat

use words for swords

 

stinging opinions from a window

mix with cleaning dishes

 

is it egos in love or love of ego,

I wonder, as both jockey to pull

ahead and win the race of rightness

which has never seen a winner

in love’s circle

 

in my relationship, if I try to pull

ahead, I stumble from remorse,

fall back with an apology and let

the other take the lead

 

our thinking is, it’s a long way

to the finish line, best to save

energy to help each other

farther down the track

 

especially on the final stretch

 
 
 

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