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Dog Walking at Dawn - Nov. 7, 2024

  • Gary Hunter
  • Nov 7, 2024
  • 1 min read

something catches my eye


a field dipped in gold

a radiant Shangri-La

of gilded grasses bending

in a soft breeze


the rising sun paints boldly

in the early morning

for a sleepy-eyed

imagination


I drive by later and see it’s

a stretch of drought-dead

weeds and bushes next to

a channel once used by water


it must have been dawn's holy air

and an obvious desire

for a heavenly visit

to a dying world


 
 
 

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